Tuesday, January 1, 2013

pet names flash fiction

Flash fiction number two based off the Bonnie "Ten things I love" list.

2) The way dogs communicate you should keep petting them after you have stopped
 



Her Dad gave the family dog the same nickname that he had given her when she was younger. Dee sat at the living room couch, staring in horror as he called the dog to him a few days after she had graduated and moved back in.

“Come here, Sweet Pea,” he said. He scratched behind her ears and across her back until he found a spot on her ribs that caused her hind leg to sputter out of control. He suddenly pulled his hand away and laughed when she rubbed her forehead desperately into the outside of his thigh. When he didn’t continue to pet her, she lay down and gazed up at him, ears perked and wagging her tail. She leapt up and let out a high-pitched bark. Dad finally caved then and went back to running his fingers on the top of her head.

It didn’t help when she first arrived to find that her room was turned over to the mutt. The floor was littered with half-eaten twisted rawhide chews. The walls were lined with stacks of canine products—tiny stuffed toys, tennis balls still suctioned into their plastic cylinder, and a few spare dog beds for when she tears the stuffing out of one again. The blankets on the bed were even wrinkled into a tiny oval where she slept at night.

At dinner that night, Dee made a joke about her parents using the dog to replace her.

Mom set down her glass. “Oh, honey. No one could ever…” She paused for a moment. “Actually—maybe a little bit.”

After dinner, Dee went up to the room and got into bed. Dee thought about her childhood here. She had their undivided attention from when she woke to when they tucked her into this bed at night. But, as a kid, she always had trouble going to sleep alone in the dark. First, she didn’t understand how she could continue breathing in her sleep. When her parents told her she didn’t have to worry about it and her body would breathe for her, she would still worry. She would be curled up in the sheets, holding her breath and waiting for her body to take over. After she finally did fall asleep, she would wake up in the middle of night and be convinced there were monsters everywhere. Her parents would come in to her room armed with an aerosol can in each hand that they claimed were full of go-away monster spray. Dad would spray in the closet and Mom would spray beneath the bed until the surrounding smell of lavender led her to sleep.

Dee woke up to find that Roxie had gotten into the room and was now curled up behind the bend of her knees. Dee started to turn on her back and straightening her legs to shove the dog out of her bed. But then Roxie cuddled in closer to her and let out a sharp exhale of breath from her nose. Somehow, Dee couldn’t bring herself to disturb the sleeping pup. She did her best to slowly and smoothly turn onto her back with her legs still mostly surrounding Roxie. Then she drifted back to sleep, the two of them packed together like two peas in a pod. 

much love,
hedgie 

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